Jon-Clement's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[hormones by vinte]

Okay... Decent start of something.

Artwork isn't too bad, but this needs to be fleshed out WAY WAY more. It's only 5 seconds of an animation with a VERY low frame rate, no colors, and no coherent story. I think you're definitely going places, though, so keep it up!

orzaneerzy responds:

This was from a while ago and a joke with my bff so yeah I repeated a lot of frames and there were no colors thanks for the criticism it always helps

[Jon in the Shower]

LOL! Wasn't as raunchy or wacky as I had hoped it would be! But please, keep it up!

Mra responds:

HUEHUEHUE

[Fandom Is Tragic]

The animation is kind of poor, but the dialogue is funny and I also tend to find speakonia voices quite funny, so it's hard for me to hate this. Good job, but try a little harder with the animation next time!

mecagir responds:

Thanks I'm glad you don't hate it. But I wasn't trying on the animation on purpose. This was an April fools joke. I made it look shitty for that very reason.

[Onirotelepath]

Magical and beautiful. The animation was fluid and the colors were so varied and complimenting. The story itself was sweet and enchanting. Great job!

AndrePaz responds:

Thanks!!

[FFVI Train Suplex]

Not bad. Art is a little choppy, sound is a little blurry, but it was funny and I had a good laugh. You obvious put effort into it. Keep up!

cackletta responds:

Thanks for the constructive critisism! I appreiciate it! I will work more on the animation next time! As for the mic, well that's just going to take time and money, but I'll get to that eventually! :)

[Odd CLyde]

A few suggestions

First, the sound quality could stand to be a little clearer.

Second, you should fix the white bars on the side. That would make it look a lot more professional.

Other than that, you did a pretty good job!

Steven77769 responds:

I dunno wtf happened watch it on you tube it's better and cleaner

[Atheist Ant]

Oh boy... -_-

While the song demonstrated a blatant lack of understanding of what evolution actually IS and how it works, as well as the appealed to fear, this wasn't a bad flash. The animation was decent, but the colors were too solid, and the artwork could have been a bit better. However, at the end, there was a failure to check facts in addition to an attempt at argument from authority, and my personal position makes that take off more points than it might other people.

But good job.

TheMentalInstitute responds:

Thanks. I think the main point of the song was that you can't deny that tracks (earth) had to come from somewhere... not just by themselves. The earth is even more complex than train tracks.

[Tom's Wedding Day!]

That was pretty good...

I liked the graphics. The voices were just BIT blurry, though, but other than that, it was excellent!

Anyway, I'm happy for the both of you... WHEN IT'S GONNA BE MY TURN?! :'(

Rudy responds:

Awh hah. Thank you. I'm glad ya liked it.

It will be your turn soon, very soon. :]

[NewbieScape]

Pretty good...

I liked that simpsons joke. :P "I HAD A STROOOOOOOOOOKE!!!"

Lopaxe responds:

i did