Not bad. Art is a little choppy, sound is a little blurry, but it was funny and I had a good laugh. You obvious put effort into it. Keep up!
Not bad. Art is a little choppy, sound is a little blurry, but it was funny and I had a good laugh. You obvious put effort into it. Keep up!
Thanks for the constructive critisism! I appreiciate it! I will work more on the animation next time! As for the mic, well that's just going to take time and money, but I'll get to that eventually! :)
A few suggestions
First, the sound quality could stand to be a little clearer.
Second, you should fix the white bars on the side. That would make it look a lot more professional.
Other than that, you did a pretty good job!
I dunno wtf happened watch it on you tube it's better and cleaner
Wow, that was kind of gruesom!
Still, awesome animation! Can't wait to see more!
Oh boy... -_-
While the song demonstrated a blatant lack of understanding of what evolution actually IS and how it works, as well as the appealed to fear, this wasn't a bad flash. The animation was decent, but the colors were too solid, and the artwork could have been a bit better. However, at the end, there was a failure to check facts in addition to an attempt at argument from authority, and my personal position makes that take off more points than it might other people.
But good job.
Thanks. I think the main point of the song was that you can't deny that tracks (earth) had to come from somewhere... not just by themselves. The earth is even more complex than train tracks.
How cute!
Really simple artwork and animation, but cute, sweet story!
Really fucked up!
I love it!
Good job for a first attempt!
Very good for a first attempt! Though, with the thought clouds, I would have replaced them with subtitles, or make them not take so long to appear. But good job, considering it was your first!
LOL!
Ha ha ha ha! Good job! XD
Good thing the me back then didn't see this, lest I have a fit!
That was pretty good...
I liked the graphics. The voices were just BIT blurry, though, but other than that, it was excellent!
Anyway, I'm happy for the both of you... WHEN IT'S GONNA BE MY TURN?! :'(
Hello there comrades. I am Jon Clement, and I am a beginer at flash. Please, don't blam all my movies because I'm just a begginer...
Age 34, Male
Mogul
British Columbia Canada
Joined on 6/5/06